Score: 5

"Allright"

submission: Love collector

date: May 3, 2009

The game plays well, but you should have spent maybe one or two extra days polishing it. Smoothing out the animations of the hearts or livening up the menu would have greatly improved the quality of the game.

Also, I don't know if you intended it or not, but after every screen, "Level 1" popped up.

Score: 4

"Keep it up"

submission: Tricky Mouse Game (rough)

date: August 1, 2008

It's great to see a newcomer to the scene.
A few suggestions:
To prevent cheating add
onClipEvent(mouseDown){
gotoAndStop(fail)
}
At the moment, clicking and dragging across the walls allows the player to cheat.

Although it doesn't matter at the moment, always optimize your vector shapes. In flash, select your shape and go to Modify>>Shape>>Optimize

Don't dwell in such simple games for too long. Challenge yourself-make a game that is one step above what you think you can make and learn from there.

-Ian

Score: 0

"So disappointed."

submission: Totally Calum Best

date: July 31, 2008

Under the Newgrounds "Submit Content" TOS:

Your movie must not simply be an ad for your site.

So slapping 'Snake' on an ad makes it not "simply be an ad for your site?" I can appreciate the need to make money, (clearly Newgrounds was paid for the frontpage placement of this game) but that's what adspace is for. This bastardization of a flash game is taking the position of a potentially WAY better flash game that an aspiring artist who can't afford to buy off Newgrounds for a frontpage position deserves.

Constructive criticism: Buy adspace like every other agency MTV and leave valuable frontpage space to deserving artists.

I am disappointed.

Score: 10

"Perfect"

submission: Portal

date: March 9, 2006

That was amazingly perfect for the final boss level of my game. Expect to see it in a few days. Keep the small amazing audio coming.