Age/Gender: 24, Male
Job: Game Design
I am a full time student who, as a profitable hobby designs and develops flash games.
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44 Reviews | 14 w/ Responses
It's great to see a newcomer to the scene.
A few suggestions:
To prevent cheating add
onClipEvent(mouseDown){
gotoAndStop(fail)
}
At the moment, clicking and dragging across the walls allows the player to cheat.
Although it doesn't matter at the moment, always optimize your vector shapes. In flash, select your shape and go to Modify>>Shape>>Optimize
Don't dwell in such simple games for too long. Challenge yourself-make a game that is one step above what you think you can make and learn from there.
-Ian
Author's Response:
lol i know
thanks for the code
jim gonna try adding movie clips to make it more like a mouse avoider not ust a maze
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What was with the fades every 2 seconds? And 3 day is nothing. A good movie takes months. Speed up the intro and it would be a lot better.
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That was very beautiful, the only things that could have made it better would have been to make a realistic walk cycle for the man and to get rid of the sound effects by the other characters. They were just too loud and harsh. But other than that, it sounded beautiful.
Author's Response:
Thanks, glad you liked it =). I'll be adjusting the sounds shortly.
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You put no heart into the game and therefore should not have submitted it. Next time instead of saying your game sucks try looking for a solution to its problems.
On main timeline:
onMouseDown = function () {
gotoAndStop("deathscreen")
};
So when you click you die.
Author's Response:
thanks. i guess i wasnt thinking. this was more of a test to a more serious maze type game.
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one suggestion, raise the framerate, and lower the increment at which the homerhead moves. It makes the game run faster
keep it up.
Author's Response:
na :) add me to favs
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you followed the exact steps of Phil Schulz quite a coincidence dont you think?
Author's Response:
what?
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i could submit a crappy stick animation too, slap some text on it and call it a joke too... but just because its supposed to b a joke, doesnt mean you cant make it look good
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D-Bomb: AAAAAH BLUE HAIR! GEDDA-OFV A MYA PLANET!!!!!!
sbizkit: ahahahaha bet i'm better at flash than u. U'll see... I'll email ya when u can see cuz ur blind right now, as i can do cartwheels for a miel/
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id call it hateful..but there were too many rainbows. respond to this, ive gotta know if ur a nazi
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Political humor, awesome, next time though maybe go into slightly more detail, it seemed constricted, like maybe show the comic, and how he found it funny. But nice work.
Author's Response:
thankyou very much! i made it this evening in about 5 hours, i might rerelease it later with a bit more in it! thanks alot for the review!
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That was great...every aspect. The only thing i could have wished for was a more severe sense of restriction, and desolation on pink. The colors were good and it flowed amazingly, but it seemed, well it didnt make me clautrophobic. Great work though, it was a work of art.
Author's Response:
whenever i drew i always made a huge landscape... and you're right, it really doesn't make sense.
a work of art? what a nice compliment. cheers.
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