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[Tricky Mouse Game (rough)]

Keep it up

It's great to see a newcomer to the scene.
A few suggestions:
To prevent cheating add
onClipEvent(mouseDown){
gotoAndStop(fail)
}
At the moment, clicking and dragging across the walls allows the player to cheat.

Although it doesn't matter at the moment, always optimize your vector shapes. In flash, select your shape and go to Modify>>Shape>>Optimize

Don't dwell in such simple games for too long. Challenge yourself-make a game that is one step above what you think you can make and learn from there.

-Ian

Marsupial responds:

lol i know

thanks for the code

jim gonna try adding movie clips to make it more like a mouse avoider not ust a maze

[Weird Game !]

Easy fix

You put no heart into the game and therefore should not have submitted it. Next time instead of saying your game sucks try looking for a solution to its problems.

On main timeline:

onMouseDown = function () {
gotoAndStop("deathscreen")
};

So when you click you die.

TJN001 responds:

thanks. i guess i wasnt thinking. this was more of a test to a more serious maze type game.

[Homerblock]

pretty cool

one suggestion, raise the framerate, and lower the increment at which the homerhead moves. It makes the game run faster
keep it up.

Aprime responds:

na :) add me to favs

[Assassin: XELA]

Great buut

it reminded me of another game alot. alot alot...i forget the name though.

Oddex responds:

Its 100% original as far as i know... I haven't seen ones like it (same style but not graphics etc.)...